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KD00LS
May 5th, 2006, 04:46 AM
Well, I just finished my paper on comparing a past event to a current or recent one. Here she is. Tell me what you guys think. Keep in mind I'm a chemistry major not an english or history.:D

Kyle DiLeo
World History II
Final Report

Iran Strategy Concerning Nuclear Weapons Resembles Cold War

George Santayana once proclaimed that “Those who do not remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” With new age diplomacy, especially with foreign disputes and controversy, this concept applies a surprising number of times with conduct between countries, religions, and ethnic backgrounds. Some actions, more important and dangerous than others, should be further examined to see if the course of operation at hand is best for both sides. Recently in news, strategies over how to remove potentially dangerous weapons from the Middle East have sparked a lot of controversy and questions about which side, either Iran or the United States, is withholding or distorting information about this very serious topic. This paper will discuss the crisis between these two countries, background information on the Cold War that started between the Soviet Union and the United States, and how these two events link together.

All across the country, media has been broadcasting the problems the United States is facing concerning the Middle East and potentially dangerous and well known phrase, ‘weapons of mass destruction.’ Recently a new topic arose, what to do about Iran and their nuclear weapons. The conflict started on April 26th, 2006. The Unites States claims to have knowledge about nuclear bombs and supplies to make them in Iran, and they want to take immediate action in removal or supervision of these weapons. Although there is no hard evidence that Iran has these weapons, “…according to the International Atomic Energy Agency, [Iran] has been successful in gradually blinding the agency’s inspectors, increasingly denying them access to crucial sites and steadfastly refusing to answer questions that look into suspected links between Iran’s civilian nuclear program and its military.” (Sanger 1) This and other similar evidence and reports is what drives the United States into believing that Iran is concealing the truth.

The United States has tried threats of “sanctions, including economic and transport measures or the severance of diplomatic relations.”(Freeman 1) These attempts at sanctions seem to have no demoralizing threat on Iran due to the fact that they have control and access to oil fields and refineries, which could paralyze the economy of the United States. As a member of OPEC, Iran can raise the oil barrel prices, or even refuse to sell to the United States and order a trade embargo. On April 17th, just after the fiasco reached a verbal altercation climax, oil prices reached $80 a barrel, which was a record high for an eight month period. With the threat of the well being of its own economy, the United States is almost powerless.

The thought of the U.S. even attempting to be involved in such a situation seems ludicrous compared to what is at stake with so little information, yet the notion of the possibility still lingers due to other reasons. Just like kids in a playground, Iran seems to be bragging to the United States on the progressiveness of their nuclear plan. Although the ‘plan’ seems to only involve technology concerning powering cities, the use of vocabulary and within context it seems as if Iran is flaunting a secret, but the United States has no probable cause to take military action. Iran uses terms such as ‘unstoppable’ and ‘irreversible’ to describe their progressiveness in nuclear technology, which seem somewhat threatening to an almost oblivious country on what their actual intentions are. Iran has not actually admitted to having weapons or the technology to create these weapons, but political analyzers of the situation claim that Iran is “…clearly drawing on the diplomatic playbook of a country that has – North Korea- to the point of boasting about, and perhaps exaggerating, its nuclear prowess in an effort to convince the West that its program is now unstoppable.” (Sanger 1)

To take a step back in time, we dwell on the post World War II relations between the West, mainly the Unites States, and the Soviet Union. The uneasy nuclear tension between these two superpowers caused a global stalemate. Using nuclear weapons as a means of trying to temporarily balance this situation, this conflict lasted decades. With both sides weighing equally on either side of the scale, it would only be a short period of time before different approaches to try and gain a step on the adversary. Events such as the Cuban Missile Crisis, in which missiles were imported to Cuba and targeted at major U.S. cities, were attempts to either break the stalemate or bring victory to one side.

Although the more dangerous part of the Cold War involving active nuclear weapons and the influence and prevention of communism ended before the 1970’s, a lesser tension still survived up until the collapse of the Soviet Union in 1991. Politically, the western powers attempted to boycott Moscow from the Olympics due to the invasion and attempt of communist influence in Afghanistan. Although nuclear SS-20 missiles were created as a means to reignite the fire of the first part of the Cold War, N.A.T.O. created a series of Strategic Arms Limitation Talks in order to disperse any military tension.

Like a virus, communism either had to spread or die. Due to the fact that it spread only to remote, and often thought of as weak countries, the Soviet Union didn’t have the funding to keep up with its military demands and the economy fell apart, spiraling into an economic depression. With the lack of funding, the Soviet Union could not possibly keep up with military technology of the western hemisphere, and had to take an imminent ‘defeat.’ The action taken by the Soviet Union “was ultimately Mikhail Gorbachev's decision, publicized in 1988, to repudiate the Brezhnev doctrine.” (Wikipedia 1)

These two events, when looked over briefly, seem to have little to no bearing between each other. In reality these two events have monumental similarities. The most important factor that both of these events share is that nuclear warfare remains as a key component in causing these international altercations. This staple in the two related events go to show that at all times, each nation is in a discreet arms race. No nation will allow for another to get an upper hand and become a threat to possibly even the rest of the world.

Another major similarity is the use of sanctions against each other in order to try and cut the moral legs out from each other. During the Cold War, actions such as the Berlin Blockage, the naval blockade of Cuba during the Cuban Missile Crisis, and the detonation of an atom bomb were all used as a mental and physical drain on the opposing nation. In the recent Iran strategy, the United States and Iran also plan on using sanctions in order to reduce the morality and drive of each other. The United States, and previously mentioned, has announced that it will not hesitate to impose trade embargos and blockades upon Iran and alliances. Iran refuted the idea by revealing that they can, at any given time, cut the massive oil supply off from the United States, rendering it progressively handicap as a nation.

Iran and the U.S. have come to a gridlock, attempting to “rewrite the rules on the fly, using every tool available” to try and gain an upper hand in a battle which seems to be impossible to gain political ground in. Considering the Cold War and how history has seemed to repeat itself once again, it only seems inevitable. (Sanger 1) Like a disease with no cure, when the problem, or Cold War, arose the first time and no real solution was compromised between the two nations, it was destined for another similar event to take place. The first time a nuclear stalemate ensued the world, it was by luck that no military action was used due to the lack of funding. Considering each nation during the current nuclear struggle is well funded, the outcome could be very different. A solution must be attained and agreed on by both side, or military action must be put in affect.
































Works Cited
“Cold War.” Wikipedia. 2006. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cold_War (29 Apr. 2006)

Fauclonbridge, Guy. “US expect to press for sanctions against Iran.” The Boston Globe. 2006. http://www.boston.com/news/world/articles/2006/04/18/us_expected_to_press_for_sanctions_against_iran/ (18 Apr. 2006)

Freeman, Simon. “US renews push for sanctions against Iran.” Times Online. 2006. http://www.timesonline.co.uk/article/0,,251-2134784,00.html (14 Apr. 2006)

Sanger, David E.; Sciolino, Elaine. “Iran Strategy: Cold War Echo.” The New York Times. 2006. http://www.nytimes.com/2006/04/30/world/middleeast/30iran.html?_r=1&oref=slogin (30 Apr. 2006)

Vitas
May 5th, 2006, 10:11 PM
Well, I just finished my paper on comparing a past event to a current or recent one. Here she is. Tell me what you guys think. Keep in mind I'm a chemistry major not an english or history.:D

Please re-post your paper with paragraph breaks.

Vitas

barry2952
May 6th, 2006, 10:16 AM
Please re-post your paper with paragraph breaks.

Vitas

I would agree that it needs to be broken into paragraphs. I can see where your paragraphs are intended to be but they are still too large. You could easily break them down further as you cover several subjects within your paragraph breaks.

KD00LS
May 6th, 2006, 02:00 PM
Okay I will, what did you guys think about it though?

barry2952
May 6th, 2006, 02:15 PM
Please repost with corrections. Right now it reads like a textbook. It may not if properly broken up.

KD00LS
May 6th, 2006, 10:34 PM
Iran Strategy Concerning Nuclear Weapons Resembles Cold War

George Santayana once proclaimed that “Those who do not remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” With new age diplomacy, especially with foreign disputes and controversy, this concept applies a surprising number of times with conduct between countries, religions, and ethnic backgrounds. Some actions, more important and dangerous than others, should be further examined to see if the course of operation at hand is best for both sides. Recently in news, strategies over how to remove potentially dangerous weapons from the Middle East have sparked a lot of controversy and questions about which side, either Iran or the United States, is withholding or distorting information about this very serious topic. This paper will discuss the crisis between these two countries, background information on the Cold War that started between the Soviet Union and the United States, and how these two events link together.

All across the country, media has been broadcasting the problems the United States is facing concerning the Middle East and potentially dangerous and well known phrase, ‘weapons of mass destruction.’ Recently a new topic arose, what to do about Iran and their nuclear weapons. The conflict started on April 26th, 2006. The Unites States claims to have knowledge about nuclear bombs and supplies to make them in Iran, and they want to take immediate action in removal or supervision of these weapons. Although there is no hard evidence that Iran has these weapons, “…according to the International Atomic Energy Agency, [Iran] has been successful in gradually blinding the agency’s inspectors, increasingly denying them access to crucial sites and steadfastly refusing to answer questions that look into suspected links between Iran’s civilian nuclear program and its military.” (Sanger 1) This and other similar evidence and reports is what drives the United States into believing that Iran is concealing the truth.

The United States has tried threats of “sanctions, including economic and transport measures or the severance of diplomatic relations.”(Freeman 1) These attempts at sanctions seem to have no demoralizing threat on Iran due to the fact that they have control and access to oil fields and refineries, which could paralyze the economy of the United States. As a member of OPEC, Iran can raise the oil barrel prices, or even refuse to sell to the United States and order a trade embargo. On April 17th, just after the fiasco reached a verbal altercation climax, oil prices reached $80 a barrel, which was a record high for an eight month period. With the threat of the well being of its own economy, the United States is almost powerless.

The thought of the U.S. even attempting to be involved in such a situation seems ludicrous compared to what is at stake with so little information, yet the notion of the possibility still lingers due to other reasons. Just like kids in a playground, Iran seems to be bragging to the United States on the progressiveness of their nuclear plan. Although the ‘plan’ seems to only involve technology concerning powering cities, the use of vocabulary and within context it seems as if Iran is flaunting a secret, but the United States has no probable cause to take military action. Iran uses terms such as ‘unstoppable’ and ‘irreversible’ to describe their progressiveness in nuclear technology, which seem somewhat threatening to an almost oblivious country on what their actual intentions are. Iran has not actually admitted to having weapons or the technology to create these weapons, but political analyzers of the situation claim that Iran is “…clearly drawing on the diplomatic playbook of a country that has – North Korea- to the point of boasting about, and perhaps exaggerating, its nuclear prowess in an effort to convince the West that its program is now unstoppable.” (Sanger 1)

To take a step back in time, we dwell on the post World War II relations between the West, mainly the Unites States, and the Soviet Union. The uneasy nuclear tension between these two superpowers caused a global stalemate. Using nuclear weapons as a means of trying to temporarily balance this situation, this conflict lasted decades. With both sides weighing equally on either side of the scale, it would only be a short period of time before different approaches to try and gain a step on the adversary. Events such as the Cuban Missile Crisis, in which missiles were imported to Cuba and targeted at major U.S. cities, were attempts to either break the stalemate or bring victory to one side.

Although the more dangerous part of the Cold War involving active nuclear weapons and the influence and prevention of communism ended before the 1970’s, a lesser tension still survived up until the collapse of the Soviet Union in 1991. Politically, the western powers attempted to boycott Moscow from the Olympics due to the invasion and attempt of communist influence in Afghanistan. Although nuclear SS-20 missiles were created as a means to reignite the fire of the first part of the Cold War, N.A.T.O. created a series of Strategic Arms Limitation Talks in order to disperse any military tension.

Like a virus, communism either had to spread or die. Due to the fact that it spread only to remote, and often thought of as weak countries, the Soviet Union didn’t have the funding to keep up with its military demands and the economy fell apart, spiraling into an economic depression. With the lack of funding, the Soviet Union could not possibly keep up with military technology of the western hemisphere, and had to take an imminent ‘defeat.’ The action taken by the Soviet Union “was ultimately Mikhail Gorbachev's decision, publicized in 1988, to repudiate the Brezhnev doctrine.” (Wikipedia 1)

These two events, when looked over briefly, seem to have little to no bearing between each other. In reality these two events have monumental similarities. The most important factor that both of these events share is that nuclear warfare remains as a key component in causing these international altercations. This staple in the two related events go to show that at all times, each nation is in a discreet arms race. No nation will allow for another to get an upper hand and become a threat to possibly even the rest of the world.

Another major similarity is the use of sanctions against each other in order to try and cut the moral legs out from each other. During the Cold War, actions such as the Berlin Blockage, the naval blockade of Cuba during the Cuban Missile Crisis, and the detonation of an atom bomb were all used as a mental and physical drain on the opposing nation. In the recent Iran strategy, the United States and Iran also plan on using sanctions in order to reduce the morality and drive of each other. The United States, and previously mentioned, has announced that it will not hesitate to impose trade embargos and blockades upon Iran and alliances. Iran refuted the idea by revealing that they can, at any given time, cut the massive oil supply off from the United States, rendering it progressively handicap as a nation.

Iran and the U.S. have come to a gridlock, attempting to “rewrite the rules on the fly, using every tool available” to try and gain an upper hand in a battle which seems to be impossible to gain political ground in. Considering the Cold War and how history has seemed to repeat itself once again, it only seems inevitable. (Sanger 1) Like a disease with no cure, when the problem, or Cold War, arose the first time and no real solution was compromised between the two nations, it was destined for another similar event to take place. The first time a nuclear stalemate ensued the world, it was by luck that no military action was used due to the lack of funding. Considering each nation during the current nuclear struggle is well funded, the outcome could be very different. A solution must be attained and agreed on by both side, or military action must be put in affect.

KD00LS
May 6th, 2006, 10:36 PM
It won't let me indent, best I can do.

barry2952
May 7th, 2006, 01:23 PM
I thought it was well written. As to it's content there are others on this site that seem to have a keen understanding of the Cold War era. I might suggest PMing Calabrio and asking for his input.

KD00LS
May 7th, 2006, 02:22 PM
Thanks for the comment, sorry about the formatting again, it won't let me indent the paragraphs.

fossten
May 7th, 2006, 07:48 PM
Thanks for the comment, sorry about the formatting again, it won't let me indent the paragraphs.

Two things about your paper:

1. It fails to credit Reagan with the bankrupting of the Soviet Union, which is significant when you look back on history and realize that Carter was President during some of the darkest days of the cold war. You left out the Carterian philosophy of appeasement, which allowed the Soviets to flourish for a time, until Reagan's new philosophy of deterrence and buildup finally cracked the dam.

2. To compare the Politburo with Mahmoud is fallacy. The Politburo, while dictatorial, greedy, and evil, was not mad. The proof is in the pudding, since Gorbachev realized and acknowledged that he could no longer keep up the facade of Soviet so-called superiority.

Mahmoud is truly mad, and has blatantly defied the West while clearly threatening Israel with nuclear attack. Those who think it would be fine to deter Mahmoud fail to understand that his goal is not to conquer territory like the Soviet expansion goal. His goal is to wipe out Israel, first and foremost, and to wipe out Western culture by throttling oil exportation and sponsoring nuclear terror.

The Soviets knew that we would retaliate if they attacked us, and they were afraid of Reagan. Mahmoud is mad and fears no one. He believes he has been sent by Allah to wreak nuclear destruction on Israel and the West. He will act when he has the weapons, and he will do so through the difficult-to-trace tentacles of terrorist organizations like Al Qaeda. Because of that, we cannot allow him to have nuclear weapons.

This isn't some p!ssing contest between two superpowers to see which d!ck is bigger. This is a classic struggle between good (the USA) and evil (Iran). Anybody who denies this is naive or hates America. People like Mahmoud do NOT respond to threats or sanctions. They view politics and strategic talks as weakness. The only thing they understand is strength and force.

Calabrio
May 7th, 2006, 11:45 PM
I'm assuming you posted this in the Political forum because you're looking for a some more persepctive regarding the content, and not asking us to look for punctuation errors.

First, I'm not sure if this is a big deal to your teacher or not, but it should be. DO NOT USE WIKIPEDIA AS A SOURCE. In the past, it's gone under the radar of a teacher. They didn't know what it was. But increasingly, teachers are seeing every single paper being turned in with virtually no other sources than Wikepida. It's not consistantly accurate, and it's viewed as a short cut.

If you need to pad your work cited, at least go investigate all of the works cited on the Wikepedia page, check them, and list the appropriate ones.

Next...
The nuclear problem with Iran didn't suddenly emerge last month, it's been on going. It's widely recognized that one of the reason the U.S. invaded Iraq had a lot to do with providing us a staging area and some leverage on Iran in the event this nuclear issue escalated. Iraq hasn't gone exactly according to plan, and that's why we find ourself in this position. I would specutate that's one of the reason the Iranians have turned up the heat as well.

The U.S. is not powerless to respond. This assertion is incorrect.

And Iran can't threaten to cut oil off from the U.S., because, to the best of my knowledge, we don't import any Iranian oil. However, they do have the ability to influence the international market. And more importantly, they have the ability to ATTEMPT blocking shipping within the region.

Seriously, you're not getting very good information. You need more sources. And with that, I fall back on your Wikipedia refrence, which since it's open source, is HIGHLY politicized. If you don't believe me, check the profiles regarding any conservative figure. The Ann Coulter one often maliciously says shes transgender.

I can nitpick that first half of the article all night. But if you're attempting to give an objective account of events, you're not doing that. And, frankly, you're not even giving an accurate one.

....as stated before, you haven't mentioned the importance of both Ronald Reagan and Pope John Paul II in creating an atmosphere that caused Ghorbachev to misplay his hand. He didn't want to see the Soviet system collapse, the liberalization he engaged in was in an effort to continue the control of the old system. In his eyes, and in the eyes of the Soviets, it ended up just emphasizing the failures of the system.

Further more, Iran still doesn't pose a direct threat to our security in the same way the Soviets did. They don't have ICBMs. Iran is more of an issue of regional and global stability. It's an entirely different situation. I disagree with any author who draws a parrell to the cold war and this.

And, also mentioned before, you can't overlook the "madman" part. The Soviets, before anything else, wanted to survive. And they were rational about it. This is why they engaged in a soft expansion policy. When ever they saw an easy opening, they took it. But Iran isn't like that. It's run by a madman, and it's also believed that he has grand dillusions about starting an end-time war to cause a second coming. The Soviets and the U.S. engaged in a policy of mutually assured destruction. Even if the other achieved a first strike, the U.S. could assuredly level all of the USSR. This isn't the case at all. We could stream roll Iran with virtually no loss of US life. It's the humanitarian effort, state building, and world opinion that are the problem.

If you want to draw a lose parrellel with the cold war, do it with the radical islam movement. You'd have a better argument.

With all of that said, I'm sure you'll get a good grade on it. Good luck. But next time, find some better sources. If you want military or accurate international relationshions info, you're best served by NOT checking Wikipedia, the New York Times, or anything regarding the English media.

KD00LS
May 8th, 2006, 01:47 AM
Whew, that was a bashing, but for the better. You guys really know your stuff. I was going to try and use BBC, but I have no idea what's biased and whatnot anymore. I just tried to throw in a few key points, it only had to be 4-5 pages doublespaced, so I didn't want to go over 5 pages. Hell, we all know we could type a book about this stuff. Thanks for the pointers guys.

fossten
May 8th, 2006, 05:13 AM
Whew, that was a bashing, but for the better. You guys really know your stuff. I was going to try and use BBC, but I have no idea what's biased and whatnot anymore. I just tried to throw in a few key points, it only had to be 4-5 pages doublespaced, so I didn't want to go over 5 pages. Hell, we all know we could type a book about this stuff. Thanks for the pointers guys.

Hey, buddy, please don't take my comments as a bashing. I don't know you and certainly didn't mean any of my critique personally. Please believe that I was responding to the information only. Keep in mind that any responses you get indicate that your paper is interesting enough to spark debate. That's a compliment.

Calabrio
May 8th, 2006, 09:07 AM
Ditto. As I mentioned, your work was good and even as it is, it'll probably be well received by the instructor. But, in the event you had a real ball busting professor, I figured you deserved for us to put the effort into scrutinizing it. Good work and good luck.

FreeFaller
May 8th, 2006, 10:46 AM
Here's a very good paper about Strategic Warfare. It was written in 1997 by a Col. Alan Parrington (USAF) and does not, of course, take into account the current climate of war. However, it does speak truths and those tend to age well irregardless of time.

It may help you further understand the Cold War years and how they were fought.

Disclaimer

The conclusions and opinions expressed in this document are those of the author cultivated in the freedom of expression, academic environment of Air University. They do not reflect the official position of the U.S. Government, Department of Defense, the United States Air Force or the Air University.

http://www.airpower.maxwell.af.mil/airchronicles/apj/apj97/win97/parrin.html#parrington

KD00LS
May 8th, 2006, 12:23 PM
Ah I didn't mean you guys were busting my balls, I just meant you guys know a hell of a lot more than I do. Thanks again.

fossten
May 9th, 2006, 01:04 PM
Ah I didn't mean you guys were busting my balls, I just meant you guys know a hell of a lot more than I do. Thanks again.

Hey, bud, if that's how you feel, then you should stick around, get involved in discussions, mix it up. I've learned a lot on this forum.


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